What Patricia Does In Her Life
Patricia Polacco is a famous author and illustrator. Patricia is a famous person who writes books for adult's and children to enjoy. A few books she wrote were Thunder Cake, Meteor and The Bee Tree. Patricia has stunned the world with her writing pieces and illustrating pieces. So all we're trying to say is that Patricia will just blow you away.
Ryan- i think you need to underline the heading so we know that it is a heading.
Quinn: I like that you named a few books
kody:underline the book names
ka'au:have more details on topic sentence.
Kalin:Grow:You need to underline things that need to be underlined. Remember person,place,thing,or title.
Glow: I like how you said "Has stunned the world with her writing" Nice details in this sentence.
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What Patricia Does In Her LifePatricia Polacco is a famous author and illustrator. Patricia is a famous person who writes books for adult's and children to enjoy. A few books she wrote were Thunder Cake, Meteor and The Bee Tree. Patricia has stunned the world with her writing pieces and illustrating pieces. So all we're trying to say is that Patricia will just blow you away.
Ryan- i think you need to underline the heading so we know that it is a heading.
Quinn: I like that you named a few books
kody:underline the book names
ka'au:have more details on topic sentence.
Kalin:Grow:You need to underline things that need to be underlined. Remember person,place,thing,or title.
Glow: I like how you said "Has stunned the world with her writing" Nice details in this sentence.